SAMPLE PERSONAL STATEMENT: I escaped the loud monotonous buzz of the enormous machine that encased me. The Hail Mary had worked. A voice came on telling me it was over.
Opening lines matter, especially when in your personal statement for college. Your personal statement is your chance to tell colleges what makes you different and why you would be a great fit for their school. Personal statements show admissions counselors your interests, values, habits, passions, and views about life. You want your essay to truly reflect you.
But where do you start? And how do you choose your topic?
Start with Your Passions
When you’re considering potential topics for your essay, choose one that’s easy to write about. If words aren’t coming to you easily, it probably means you aren’t particularly passionate about your topic.
Counselors will be able to tell if you don’t have passion behind your words. Remember that admissions counselors are reading dozens of essays each day. You want to share a topic that’s unique to you (if possible), backed by story-telling that shows a different angle than other students who play lacrosse or love debate or mastered the violin.
Pick Your Personal Statement Topic
- Brainstorm topics. Set a timer and make a long list of every topic that truly interests you and reveals you.
- Talk to your family members and close friends. Ask people close to you about the things that they see you’re passionate about. You might not realize what makes you light up when you talk about it.
- Hobbies you have outside of school
- Social causes you care about
- A volunteer opportunity that changed your view of the world
- An event locally or even internationally that’s affected you
- An academic subject that has led to experiences or personal study outside of school
- A special trip you took and how it affected you
- Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
- The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?
- Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?
- Describe a problem you’ve solved or a problem you’d like to solve. It can be an intellectual challenge, a research query, an ethical dilemma-anything that is of personal importance, no matter the scale. Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution.
- Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.
- Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?
- Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you’ve already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.
Other Personal Statement Tips
First, make sure you answer the question that the specific application asks. Make sure you follow all the given instructions.
Also, make sure the essay is primarily about you. If you are writing a tribute to your grandmother and her influence on you, be personal and specific, not just sentimental. Explain how what she did and said were important to you. Your goal is not to get her admitted but to get you admitted.
Then, start off with a strong opening statement and develop your argument and narrative. Make sure you check all your facts as well as your grammar and punctuation. Proofread! Then have someone else proofread. Then proofread it again!
Finally, get at least one draft done before November so you’ll have plenty of time to perfect it.